Tangerine's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[On Your Path chiptune Remake]

This sounds amazing! Good job Melon.

supermelon-creations responds:

thxx :D oh no the picture is broken
lemme fix that

[winter caves]

Hey, great job! This is exactly what I'd imagine hearing in a cold winter cave. Maybe some strings in the background could help with the cold wintery feeling. Sort of like Winter Bliss https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDHZgVf8xsU. Good job on the song none-the-less.

felipenadhel responds:

thanks :3, i will try to work more on the next ones, i usually try to make something simple-ish for being used on a game soundtrack

[Circle]

This sounds really nice! 00:35 sounds a little strange. Sounds discordant. other than that it sounds amazing.

Surkol responds:

Thanks!! Yea you're 100% right. There is a note or two that is discordant/out of tune but I kept it cause it didn't sound that bad. I could say it's an artistic choice but it's more me being lazy

[Jazz Standards]

Veenom back at it again. This one sounds amazing. I really love the bass line throughout the song and the otamatone holding an amazing melody. The two things I'd change is the incredibly active start, perhaps have a beat or two to quickly warm the listener up and the i'd change the panning of the instruments. It might pay off a little to bring the piano more towards the centre. Other than that, amazing job! It sounds fantastic.

Veenomn responds:

Thanks! :D

[Wyoming]

I really like this one. It feels so much more different than the other ones and I really like how you're starting to mix things up a little. Feels much less ominous and much more friendly and slightly happy. I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks that. I really like how you had a little reset section where you played the intro again. I think it was really nice and impactful. Welldone 50Steaks. I think you did really well on this one :).

50Steaks responds:

Thank you! I try not to overload one specific mood or genre. Although I started doing ambient tracks in 2020 with Alaska, this is the first one that I think truly accomplished exactly what I wanted from an atmospheric song. I think this is proven by its 430ish listens, making it far and away the most popular thing I've ever released on this account.

[Happy Silly Place.]

This sounds great, very hyper and happy. Sounds exactly like what I'd expect from something called "Happy Silly Place". Reminds me a lot of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aQ6Fq-LfDZQ. Something that may have sounded good is if you added another bridging section around 1:00 with offbeat flutes and piano whilst it goes through the chord progression. Then when it gets near the end of the phrase you speed them up to something like semi-quavers and then have a giant finish of pure happiness and joy to wrap up the piece with a more satisfying conclusion. Still, without that last little bit, it sounds awesome. Keep it up!

MassiveMarioLuigi700 responds:

Thanks for the advice! Im glad you've enjoyed it!

[[Full Cover] Somewhere Over the Rainbow]

Wow, your voice is lovely. Keep it up.

darkelfAife responds:

Thank you!!

[Oklahoma]

Wow, this sounds really nice. I love how you used a tornado for the disc. Paints a beautiful picture. Have you ever tried using instruments? I feel like a brass harmony would have sounded really good here.

50Steaks responds:

I agree, and if I had a few hundred dollar computer software I would probably have been able to add in more varied instruments. The problem is it feels like 60% of the synths FL has are complete garbage for the types of music I create, there’s a weird emphasis on funk and modern renditions of it.

[lol idk how to delete old songssss]

what.... u good there?

milkypossum responds:

I blame the apple pie flavored moonshine