Amazing job!
Amazing job!
Thanks!
Well done, it's a great piece. Maybe just try to use a different rhythm for the second part of the melody so that it will engage the viewer more. It is very repetitive (if you're going to aesthetic game background music then it's perfect) so maybe try to change things up by adding another instrument to complement it. Other than that great piece!
Thanks!
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That's a very interesting intro melody haha. I really like the fast-paced primary melody! Well done. 1:45 Really great job on a hyped chorus (Idk if it's called that I'm music illiterate). Good job it sounds great!
I don't know what it's called either, I'm not that good with words. but thx!!
Well done on this song! I really like the addition you made in 1:26 it really helped give the chorus more depth. A simple but groovy bass line, in the beginning, would have helped grab the listeners attention a bit more (unless it would have gone against the theme you were going for). I really love the whole chaotic theme of it. I'm not too sure what's happening in America currently. All I hear is that riots and that there are people dying there. I don't take any offence to this since I barely know what the whole George Floyd. All I know is he was killed by the police and people are having this whole race thing. It would be a really nice addition if there were quiet rioting and gunshots in 0:22 - 0:3` to further push the whole chaos aesthetic you were going for. Very good song well done (sorry for the long comment haha).
Note: I just realized my comment is longer than the description... oops.
This is one of my best drops I think. The buildup and release tie in well and match exactly what I was trying to go for. I’ve never really made a song like this before, with a constantly changing main melody and instruments. FL doesn’t have stuff like that, in terms of gunshots or screaming, most of their samples may as well be rated R. I know you wouldn’t be offended by this, but in case someone rated it 0 stars because they thought I was trying to diss Floyd I didn’t want that to happen. I have a habit of doing long reviews on songs because simplifying my thoughts seems unnecessary. Giving a long review shows that the reviewer cares about the song and wants the artist to take their feedback seriously (instead of just the word “Florida” in a review on Florida). And here I go rambling.
Sounds amazing!
Why thank you!!!
I could totally see this being the beginning of an epic song. Great startup.
thanks!
Sounds amazing. Good job! Despite me knowing you for your castle crasher music I really like this piece. Good job.
Thanks for listening!
I love the slow calm jazz vibes this gives. Good job!
Thanks, I like more energetic jazz better but I'm still a beginner at jazz composition and slower more relaxing jazz seemed like a good place to start practicing chord progressions I wasn't used to yet.
Wow! This sounds fantastic! Great work.
Thanks! Always nice to receive nice feedback from NG.
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