Tangerine's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Permeate]

Neat track! House is pretty different to what I typically do, so take my tips and advice with a grain of salt.

From what I've learnt over the years I've been doing music, having a strong memorable melody is an ace up your sleeve. Something that people can quietly sing to themselves in the shower is the goal, especially for electronic genres (slightly less so for more traditional genres).

I'd suggest playing around with more complex rhythms and compositional techniques. Lots of variation between sections whilst still staying true to the song you're making. I'm not super familiar with house so I'm not quite sure if it is one of the genres which pride themselves on their simplicity, but I think trying out new rhythms would do you a lot of good!

[GizzyKittyMusic - [Jamuary Day 31]]

I love how peaceful this one is. It has such a beautiful atmosphere and reminds me of what I hear in certain games with very strong messages in them.

Congrats on making it to the end! Your stamina is impressive. I just realized that you've released more tracks than I have. One hell of a work ethic.

[I Miss U (Can't Go On)]

Very cool song! Makes me feel nostalgic and it's very catchy.

One thing that would have made it even better is if there had been more variety between the times the chorus played. A good switch-up can help prevent a song from becoming repetitive if the viewer doesn't have their full attention to it.

Punk isn't a music genre I have done before, so take what I say with a grain of salt.

I really like all the vocal modifications you used. They have such a neat effect :)

Musicbyfox01 responds:

This was my first ever rock song I made in 2023, so i wasnt as experienced as i am now. I really appreciate your critiques though!

[Thunder Strike]

Love the brass. Great job!

[Journey for Two]

This is lovely! Your follower count is infinitesimal compared to what it should be :)

ArramEggleston responds:

Thank you for the kind words :)

[Giant Enemy Spider (Jerma985)]

Oh my god, this is amazing! I love the energy of the piece. You are very skilled :)

[GizzyKittyMusic - [Jamuary Day 26]]

You're almost there! A couple more days to go

[In Another Story (Instrumental Version)]

Sounds good!

[Pause Menu]

Nice!

[GizzyKittyMusic - [Jamuary Day 16]]

Going strong! I'm impressed with how far you've made it. I wish you luck with the rest of the month

GizzyKittyMusic responds:

Thanks! I'm trying my best :D