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[Rockier Encountier]

What you have under misc kit is hilarious xD

[A Man's Castle]

Very cool! I wish you luck with the deathmatch!

Joel-Phelps responds:

Thanks! I really appreciate it!

[Pure]

Wow, this is lovely! I would just like to mention one thing. I think this piece could benefit a lot from a change in progression, and texture. If you were to skip through the song, you wouldn't hear any big differences between the sections.

The biggest thing would be a shift compositionally. Perhaps a noticeably different chord progression and a section with a slightly different feeling. Though of course keeping in the same overall theme. It'll help the piece tell a story and improve its replayability.

I see that you did switch up the chords slightly at 02:40, but still, I would have liked to see another section that explores a sub-feeling that the overall piece has. Just to give it a little more emotional depth. Making a piece that's nearly 5 minutes long, the last thing you want is for it to get repetitive :)

This song is so peaceful and beautiful. I wish you luck with the deathmatch and I hope you have a lovely year

ChrisisD responds:

Thanks! I do get your point of changing up the chords. This was a deliberate choice though, keeping it extremely simple and letting the buildup and synths do the work.
Thanks for taking the time to review my track! Good luck to you too!

["Lose/Lose"]

such a lovely song. I hope you have a great day :)

LANPartyAnimal responds:

Thank you! You too

[Clarity]

That's a crazy solo mate! Very good song you have here. my biggest feedback would be to tune the vocals a little bit more. There are many areas where the singing is out of tune. It's a really easy fix. I'm pretty sure most DAWs come stock with a vocal tuner. No shame in touching up vocals every now and then, everyone does it ;)

Awesome guitar, I like it!

TentotheC responds:

Thanks, mate!
I used Melodyne quite heavily to tune-up my vocals, it seems I have to get used to it, maybe rather train my voice some more. I’m not a very strong vocalist yet, but in a one-man band this makes do :D

[Composition 4]

Crazy how I just accidentally reuploaded this one lmaoo

[Stella Erratica Dalfaria El-Vay]

You're a musical wizard Dan!

DanJohansen responds:

Thanks a ton man! WIZARDS AND WARRIORS!

[The Price of the Past]

insane singing holy

PixxlMan responds:

Thanks!

[Wanna Be With You Dear]

Woah this is awesome! Lovely track :)