Truly beautiful
Truly beautiful
Thanks! 😊
Oh god he's back
Ye
He back from the dead
You've become one with the wub wubs
Thank you!
Yeah.. you're right! I should never give up my smoking addiction. What? that's not what you were talking about? oh..
I wasnt
Cookies are great. Much like this song!
Legend has it that if people eat a cookie while listening to this song, they achieve holy powers
Nice cover/remix! You nailed the magical aspects :)
Thank you!
Very calming jazz
I'm craving a tangerine
thanks for the review
oh, I see
what
A very cute composition. I like it. Also, how could you post this song without sharing the lyrics in the comments? I (and others who listen to this) think this would be a nice song to sing along to. The genre does confuse me though. General rock?
Thank you! I didn’t know what category to put it in… Also:
A chorus of a million electric balloons
They streak across the aether like golden harpoons
Oh one day will someone tell them to stop singing?
Oh one day will someone tell them to stop lingering?
Oh(x48)
A chorus of a million marauders on clocks
A world-destroying weapon contained in a box
Oh one day will someone tell them to just drop it?
Oh one day will someone tell them to just stop it?
Oh(x48)
A legion of immeasurable desire
A floating threat proliferating the fire
The transport convoy delivers the shipments to sea
And the behemoth will spread them from country to cay
Oh(x47)
Rubber all connects to metal wiring
Where the wretched engine is residing
Smoke suffuses from the faulty framing
Inhalation leaves no soul remaining
Oh(x47)
Hey, this is really neat. I can definitely sense the personality in this one haha. I really like how you handled this, it's not too often I hear people using movements in their Newgrounds submissions.
If I had to change something, I would say maybe recheck the clarinet in 01:02. I feel like the second note in that may sound better if it were raised up a note or a semitone. It would make it sounds more appealing to the listener while still having its menacing effect and giving the feeling of war and pain. Although I don't exactly know what it will end up sounding like since I haven't tried it, I do recommend playing around with it to see what works best with the rest of the harmony you've composed.
Overall, I like it a lot! I hope you keep composing music because I do think you have a good ear for it :)
Thank you so much! The dissonance is intentional, but I’ll take a look at it because you sound right
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School of Rock
New Zealand
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