Tangerine's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Biting Bits]

Oh hey, it's always nice to see an LMMS user. I remember years ago when I was first getting into music, I tried using LMMS and it was too complicated (that as well as me not knowing and music theory) which made me give up lol. I now use FL studio but I have mad respect for LMMS users. I like the song.

[Retro boss music loop]

oh, I see

IdontknowAAA2 responds:

what

[FNRytp Menu Theme]

Very nice, unfortunately I can't understand any of the Russian. Regardless, I think this sounds good.

[Art's Theme]

This is a very fun-sounding theme, haha. Incredibly high quality which is always a delight to hear.

[GizzyKittyMusic - Free Time]

Hey Grizzy, it's been a while since I've seen you on here.

I am sorry to hear about what happened to your previous account. Instances like that are why I am very afraid of using online sound effects for services I didn't pay for. it's a really crappy thing to have happened and it's a shame you never got your appeal. Oh well, things happen and we have to keep moving, right?

I see you've already released a few new songs on your account and I think that's neat. I wish you the best of luck with your future songs :)

[something random again]

the sequel does not disappoint. Lives up to the glory of the first one for sure.

[something random]

amazing

[Electric Balloons]

A very cute composition. I like it. Also, how could you post this song without sharing the lyrics in the comments? I (and others who listen to this) think this would be a nice song to sing along to. The genre does confuse me though. General rock?

fishinatree0 responds:

Thank you! I didn’t know what category to put it in… Also:

A chorus of a million electric balloons
They streak across the aether like golden harpoons
Oh one day will someone tell them to stop singing?
Oh one day will someone tell them to stop lingering?
Oh(x48)
A chorus of a million marauders on clocks
A world-destroying weapon contained in a box
Oh one day will someone tell them to just drop it?
Oh one day will someone tell them to just stop it?
Oh(x48)
A legion of immeasurable desire
A floating threat proliferating the fire
The transport convoy delivers the shipments to sea
And the behemoth will spread them from country to cay
Oh(x47)
Rubber all connects to metal wiring
Where the wretched engine is residing
Smoke suffuses from the faulty framing
Inhalation leaves no soul remaining
Oh(x47)

[Salvo]

Hey, this is really neat. I can definitely sense the personality in this one haha. I really like how you handled this, it's not too often I hear people using movements in their Newgrounds submissions.

If I had to change something, I would say maybe recheck the clarinet in 01:02. I feel like the second note in that may sound better if it were raised up a note or a semitone. It would make it sounds more appealing to the listener while still having its menacing effect and giving the feeling of war and pain. Although I don't exactly know what it will end up sounding like since I haven't tried it, I do recommend playing around with it to see what works best with the rest of the harmony you've composed.

Overall, I like it a lot! I hope you keep composing music because I do think you have a good ear for it :)

fishinatree0 responds:

Thank you so much! The dissonance is intentional, but I’ll take a look at it because you sound right