I like the title
I like the title
This feels so nostalgic for some reason. 10/10
thanks!
Tangerine
just for you;)
My heels don't light up :(
Tunes are fun to make
lol hello tangerine!!
Tangerine
This is super cool and suspenseful. Very nice!
Very sick!
Thank you!!!
Truly beautiful
Thanks! π
Hey, this sounds awesome. I think you did a great job at 02:25, it sounds very exciting. I also really like the ending. It's something different and it adds a little more depth to the song.
There is just one thing I want to comment on though. I feel like the middle sections and the chorus lack variation a little. It feels a little repetitive because most of the song and the chorus sound very similar and have a similar feel to them. Of course, I say mostly because 1:08 to 1:37 is the only other time apart from the intro and outro which gives us something different. A little variation between sections would make the chorus shine even brighter.
Of course, I am not too knowledgeable about house music, so if what I said does not apply to the genre, just ignore it haha. I mostly do orchestral/cinematic music so I'm a little out of my element here. But variation is a really good thing to use in your song because it lets you set up a lot of moments and feelings in your music.
Other than that, I really like it!
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