I absolutely love how the description lyrics doesn't 100% match what he's singing. 10/10 Tom you need to see this lmao.
I absolutely love how the description lyrics doesn't 100% match what he's singing. 10/10 Tom you need to see this lmao.
Sorry for the late response. I like the very ominous beginning (Start-00:24) it really brings a lot of tension. Like you said, "I tried, for April Fools, to make a song that sounded very similar to a combination of my previous songs." Sounds a lot like your previous songs but I think this still deserves its own ground. Very repetitive melody (WHich isn't a bad thing since I think it fits with this piece. I see you also went with a 3/4 approach like my song "Rays of the sun" or whatever I called it. I really love the electro waltz feel of it. The ending is very abrupt and I think it would have complimented the piece better if it were to soften down a little at the end to give it a more concluding feel. I know this isn't really my ground to speak since I have done the same thing. Very good piece overall. I look forward to your next state.
I’d argue that, while the ending is pretty bad since I finished this song yesterday, the flow of the track between sections is in desperate need of fixing. I’ll have to go fix that eventually and try to add on a section at the end to make it feel like an ending. Yeah, it does seem a lot like an electro waltz, unfortunately that’s not a genre so I just went with the generic “trance”.
What a beginning... Great song though.
This sounds amazing! I just kind of feel that it would have sounded better if you used real instruments like trumpets and stuff. Would have suited it more in my opinion. But other than that it sounds amazing! good job.
Thanks :D. haha I mean I would use real instruments but I can't play any instruments.
Thanks for listening :)
Amazing job!
Thanks!
Well done, it's a great piece. Maybe just try to use a different rhythm for the second part of the melody so that it will engage the viewer more. It is very repetitive (if you're going to aesthetic game background music then it's perfect) so maybe try to change things up by adding another instrument to complement it. Other than that great piece!
Thanks!
Sounds great! I really love the hype feel of it. Feels like this could be on something like geometry dash.
Really gives that relaxing lofi hip-hop vibe. Well done! I love the finger clicks. A faint shaker would have sounded neat in this piece. That alien space ship sounding thing in the first melody sounds really nice. The bridge gave me heavy 'calm before the storm' vibes. This is a really nice and relaxing piece. Good job.
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