Tangerine's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snufkin]

Hey, this is really neat. The background looks amazing and I can see you put a lot of effort into it.

Your art has lots of potential, but I think a thing you really have to think about is your proportions. The eyes could be shifted around the nose and mouth. Perhaps bringing the nose and mouth more to the right could help make the face look more symmetrical in its proportions. I know it's difficult with the position you chose, but I feel like your art can flourish so much more if you just get the facial proportions down. You could even take the eye on the right of the illustration and bring it close to the nose and mouth. Just to make the two eyes look equal distance from the eye, even though you've got an angle.

Another thing is the hands. They don't look right. I know it's a common joke around artists that the hands are the demons of drawing, but it's a really important thing to get down. Once you get your hands down, it opens up so many positions you can put them in. I do applaud you for not simply hiding them.

I would recommend focusing on your proportions first before worrying too much about drawing a lot of detail. Proportions are really important and is what could make or break a drawing.

Apologies if it sounds like I'm just flaming your drawing. I'm not trying to. I feel that you can go far with your drawing so that is why I am trying to give you pointers on where you could improve. I hope this helps!

ErasedMe responds:

thanks for this thoughtful comment.
I usually use the 3d models from clip studio for my drawings- but here I drew it on my own again. So could you look at an older drawing and tell me if the proportion are off there too? I hope that's not too much to ask but if that's the case I need to learn more about how to use theese models

[The Great Progenitors]

Hey, this is awesome man. I really love the colour scheme and the design of it. I don't really know if I have any feedback to say about it. I feel like you achieved what you set out to do. Maybe a little more detail? But that all comes down to practice so idk. Anyway, thank you for participating in the challenge! I hope to see you next month :)

Thetageist responds:

Yeah, I definitely would've added some more details to these beings if I'd known what I was doing, haha.

[Glass Of Vaporeon]

"Why is my water crunchy?"

[M1 Thompson]

Damn, that's awesome. I want to see you draw a PPSh-41 :)

[Spongebill]

Put it down. Please it's for the greater good of humanity

[Comic thigny]

The funky fun times?

Cuvuly responds:

That'd be better than what actually happened tbh

[WATASHI WA JONI BURABO!!!!]

That's amazing. I remember watching johnny bravo when I was younger. Brings back good memories :)

blizzarddemon responds:

Thanks^^ He brings back good memories too

[i could not come up with a decent name for this]

love the title

[girlfriend]

A girlfriend?! I didn't know they were real

[Rice]

I like your art style