Tangerine's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nona - Indifferent Stare]

This is amazing

[OC Drawing #6]

Very nice

Response: >:)

misterbright responds:

you cant fool me. i know what ur up to

[New style for Diso]

I will die for you

[Redraw- Pink princess]

Oh my, this is amazing. I definitely get what you mean. The face is symmetrical and natural looking. Also, looking at the difference between the two drawings, you've improved a lot! the only thing I feel that would make this piece even better would be to add a background of the outside of a palace or something. Something to give it that little extra. I do see in your newer illustrations, you're drawing beautiful backgrounds so I guess saying it now doesn't really matter.

One more thing! I noticed this right before I sent this through. The fingers seem a little stubby. I think this is because they seem to be the same size. Maybe give them different lengths to make them seem less stubby and more realistic. This is more for the top hand. The bottom one is fine.

ErasedMe responds:

Thank you!!!
Honestly idk what happend here haha
As you see my art is sometimes good sometimes just ok, at least when it comes to proportions and all.
It's pretty much luck based if I can get it right
at least that's how I feel
Maybe that's because I feel kinda burned out rn..either way I'm happy that you like this drawing

[Core Keeper gang]

Hey, I read your message and don't worry. I'm more than happy to look over older drawings.

In this illustration, your facial proportions are much better. Although, you still have the problem with the eye being slightly too far. This case is not as bad as the previous one. The angle is a little confusing so I don't know how to give accurate feedback on the facial proportions. Just look at it carefully and look at any part which looks natural or janky. Then figure out exactly what the problem is and fix it that way :).

The best way to improve is to keep making art and to have (If possible) someone to help support you and give you feedback. Having constructive criticism from someone is the best way to improve. Unfortunately, my forte is music and certainly not drawing so I don't know how much I can help. The most I can do is point out general things like lighting & shading, facial proportions etc.

I would recommend you draw your faces with a reference with the same pose. That will help with looking for natural.

ErasedMe responds:

Thank you so much for going over this.
Yeah faces are like my enemy
I know you can like flip the canvas to see if it looks wonky but I was always too lazy to do it. (My laziness is probably the reason why I'm slow in learning how to draw)
I wish I had someone good to give me critique- if I get it form people that are close to me it's sadly very mean. But your critique isn't so that's nice

[Shoot for glory]

Woah, this piece is very pretty. The glimmering and the sky are done very well. I only see one main thing which I noticed straight away. The nose looks a little off. I'm not too sure how to describe it but it looks a little unnatural. Maybe this was intentional. I don't know. But other than that, I like it.

[Blissful Night]

This is beautiful

[Sleeping Island]

Woah, this is neat

[Lucky cat , study]

That's adorable

[New touhou bois!!!]

Your art style is so clean!